Drew@sopuli.xyzM to LinkedinLunatics@sh.itjust.works · 29 days agoI think this guy should try being a novelistsopuli.xyzimagemessage-square7fedilinkarrow-up192arrow-down10
arrow-up192arrow-down1imageI think this guy should try being a novelistsopuli.xyzDrew@sopuli.xyzM to LinkedinLunatics@sh.itjust.works · 29 days agomessage-square7fedilink
minus-squareClay_pidgin@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up45·29 days agoThat’s really good creative writing and really bad LinkedIn posting.
minus-squareJack Riddle@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up36·29 days agoIt would be good creative writing if you couldn’t feel the vast corporate void behind these words
minus-squareSunoc@sh.itjust.workslinkfedilinkarrow-up8·29 days agoNo no no, that’s what gives flavor to the text!
minus-squareSergio@slrpnk.netlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up12arrow-down1·29 days agoEh… if this were written in high school it’d be promising. In college, not a bad first draft. In grad school, if this is the result of several revisions then you’re definitely not top of the class.
That’s really good creative writing and really bad LinkedIn posting.
It would be good creative writing if you couldn’t feel the vast corporate void behind these words
No no no, that’s what gives flavor to the text!
Eh… if this were written in high school it’d be promising. In college, not a bad first draft. In grad school, if this is the result of several revisions then you’re definitely not top of the class.